It does make sense, as much as any of this convoluted gymnastic thought makes any sense.
I can completely get behind your thinking and I there are some serious concepts in Christianity, as well as cultural aspects of it, that I embrace. It's trying to make them line up that gets tricky. It's funny because panentheism isn't anathema necessarily to Christianity - there are several majors thinkers that employ this, and the idea of trinity can be amazingly beautiful with incredibly transformative potential, but getting everything to fit together is the challenging part. It's like each part of my wacky Christianity works on its own, but put together I end up being pagan. I am convinced that someday it can all come together and be good for both sides.