I was majorly underwhelmed by this. I was frankly surprised at the poor delivery and the lack of "poetry" of the language. It came across very mundane, trite, flat, and clumsy.
I'm not a poetry person, but contrasted with, say Mary Oliver, this one left me cold.
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Date: 2009-02-06 09:05 am (UTC)I'm not a poetry person, but contrasted with, say Mary Oliver, this one left me cold.