Date: 2010-05-27 06:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ewigweibliche.livejournal.com
Yes! The first is great. The second and third just seem.... well, not as tight. Waaaaaay too much exposition. However, I realize that he died after turning in the manuscripts so perhaps he had been able to edit the first one more? But #1 is great.
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