Yeah, I don't love this one either. I like though. It feels quintessentially American to me. Simple. Reflecting values I share. So it's hard for me not to like it. The delivery down right stank.
One of my coworkers is an honest-to-god poet and she also was not impressed by the delivery, nor by the poem.
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Date: 2009-02-05 11:06 pm (UTC)One of my coworkers is an honest-to-god poet and she also was not impressed by the delivery, nor by the poem.